This is a real summary of a company’s business:
XYZ Consulting, the first XXX company who offers consultant in career management, is interested in assisting it`s partners in increasing their efficiency by maximizing individual and organizational performances. And we offer solutions in organizational development (Executive Search, Assessment, Development & Training Centers, consultant in developing career plans, training, evaluation), Recruiting and Contracting.
This is the kind of stuff I use to make “corporate speak” humor from in my conversations.
How about: XYZ Consulting maximizes their client’s human resource investment.
Wouldn’t that save a whole lot of skimming and trying to find the salient points by their potential clients?
Scot
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